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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm a student from XX University majored in Machine Design ,who is preparing cet-6 right now and need a reference book.
     First of all, I would like to know whether you have a book named 'Word for cet-6' in your book store.By the way, is there any discount on it,if I buy the book?Moreover, is there an online saling website which I can buy the book.At last, I would like to know whether you offer a dilivery service since my school is far away from your book store.
     I'm looking forward your reply.Thank you!
     Sincerecely yours
     Liming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a student from XX University majored in Machine Design , who is preparing cet-6 right now and need a reference book. First of all, I would like to know whether you have a book named 'Word for cet-6'（英语中书名不用引号） in your book store. By the way, is there any discount on it, if I buy the book? Moreover, is there an online saling（拼写错误） website which I can buy the book. At last, I would like to know whether you offer a dilivery（拼写错误） service since my school is far away from your book store. I'm looking forward your reply. Thank you! Sincerecely（拼写错误） yours（加逗号） Liming（Ming）点评：6-7分写的还可以，但是错误有点多，要注意拼写和细节，不要在格式上丢分。