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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam:
    Having received the email from your university yesterday,I am grateful to be accpted as a exchange student next term.The experience will be unforgettabled throughout my life.
    However,as a student who is first time to study abroad,I have several following questions:firstly,could you help me rent a hostel nearby the camp?Secondly,may I change the courses that have chosen in my former preparation.Lastly,could you offersome informations about my living and study environment?
    Thanks for your help.Looking forward to your reply.
     Yours,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）:（英语中用逗号） Having received the email from your university yesterday, I am grateful to be accpted（拼写错误）as a（应该用an） exchange student next term. 【The experience will be unforgettabled（拼写错误）throughout my life.】（这句话与问询没有什么关系）However, as a student who is first time to study abroad, I have several following questions: firstly, could you help me rent a hostel nearby the camp? Secondly, may I change the courses that have chosen in my former preparation.（这是个疑问句，用问号）Lastly, could you offersome informations（拼写错误） about my living and study environment? Thanks for your help. Looking forward to your reply. Yours（建议加一个副词，例如sincerely或是truly等）, Li Ming点评：6分字数有点不够。拼写错误有点多，注意格式。建议第一段就说明来意，表明有问题想要询问，然后第二段进行问询。