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Dear Sir or Madam:
     I'm a college sthdent.I am writing this letter to inquire that how can I get the book of 《Processing: Creative Coding and Computational Art》.
     First,is this book written by Cooper in 2007 who is an American? There are so many editions in the market that hardly to distinguish.Otherwise,《Processing:Creative Coding and Computational Art》is made me attention one month ago when I searched for it on web where is no existing stock all the time.The attendant told me this book hasn't published at all only to book.When can I get it?
     I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.
    YoursSincerely
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号） I'm a college sthdent（拼写错误）. I am writing this letter to inquire that how can I（这里要用陈述语气，改成I can） get the book of 《Processing: Creative Coding and Computational Art》（注意英语中不用书名号）. First, is this book written by Cooper in 2007 who is an American? There are so many editions in the market that hardly to distinguish. 【Otherwise,《Processing: Creative Coding and Computational Art》（注意英语中不用书名号）is made me attention one month ago when I searched for it on web where is no existing stock all the time.】（这一部分与问询没有太大的关系，可以几个词交代一下背景即可） The attendant told me this book hasn't published at all only to book. When can I get it? I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.YoursSincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：6分要注意英语中的书写规则，注意细节处。