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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I'm a student in this university and usually come to the library to spend my spare time.The services you offer here are quite good,making me feel comfortable.
     Recently,I've heard something about your improving services to maitain more students' needs.Then i would like to know the detail to make sure.Firstly,is it true that you'll prolong the time for reading?if so,i'm so grateful to your kind consideration.In the daytime,most of students are having classes.However,we will have much more time for reading in the future.Secondly,i appreciate the opportunity to find several new kinds of magazines on the shelves.Could you so kind as to tell me the name of new books you'll provide us?
     Thank you for your time and look forward your reply.
    Sincerely yours
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  I'm a student in this university and usually come to the library to spend my spare time. The services you offer here are quite good, making me feel comfortable.  Recently, I've heard something about your improving services to maitain（拼写错误） more students' needs. Then i（大写I）would like to know the detail to make sure. Firstly, is it true that you'll prolong the time for reading? if（大写I） so, i'm（大写I） so grateful to your kind consideration. 【In the daytime, most of students are having classes. However, we will have much more time for reading in the future. 】（跟问询没关系，可以去掉）Secondly, i（大写I）appreciate the opportunity to find several new kinds of magazines on the shelves. Could you so kind as to tell me the name of new books you'll provide us?  Thank you for your time and look（用looking）forward your reply. Sincerely yours（加逗号）Li Ming 点评：6分字数超的比教多，于问询无关的内容应该去掉。分清大小写的情况。