考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(261)

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student from Beijing Normal University ,whoare planning to take part in the English Speaking Contest held by your department.I would be very pleased if you are so kind as to answer my questions below.To begin with, whether there are some restrictions for the candidates. Secondly, I need to know the methods of signing up and the payment for the enrollment fees.Lastly,please give me some advice and relevent detailssuch as,the rules,the process and the awards of the contest ,if it is convenient for you.I would like to express my heartfelt appreciation for your kind consideration of my request.Looking forward to your reply soon.Yours truly,Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
   
    To begin with, whether there are some restrictions for the candidates. Secondly, I need to know the methods of signing up and the payment for the enrollment fees. Lastly, please give me some advice and relevent（拼写错误，relevant）detailssuch as, the rules, the process and the awards of the contest, if it is convenient for you.I would like to express my heartfelt appreciation for your kind consideration of my request. Looking forward to your reply soon. Yours truly,Li Ming点评：9分
写的很不错，错误也很少。注意控制字数。I am a student from Beijing Normal University, whoare planning to take part in the English Speaking Contest held by your department. I would be very pleased if you are so kind as to answer my questions below.