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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am planning to take the National Entrance Test for MA/MS Candidates.I am writting the letter to ask for some questions about the test.
     To begin with,I am an undergraduate student and have graduated two years.So I wonder whether I could enter the examination of your university.Moreover, are there something else requirements of the candidates.Last but not least,I hear that your university could give some materials to the candidates about their professional classes.I would appreciat if you are kind enough to send the materials of Biochemical professional class to me by EMS at your earlist convenience. Of course, I would pay for the relevant expenses.
     Thank you for your time and reading.I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am planning to take the National Entrance Test for MA/MS Candidates. I am writting（拼写错误） the letter to ask for some questions about the test. To begin with, I am an undergraduate student and have graduated two years. So I wonder whether I could enter the examination of your university. Moreover, are there something（这里应该用some，修饰后面的requirements） else requirements of the candidates. Last but not least, I hear that your university could give some materials to the candidates about their professional classes. I would appreciat（拼写错误） if you are kind enough to send the materials of Biochemical professional class to me by EMS at your earlist（拼写错误） convenience. Of course, I would pay for the relevant expenses. Thank you for your time and reading. I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6-7分字数超出的比较多。整体写的还可以的，拼写错误有点多，都是常见词，不要拼错。