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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    As I am planning to take part in the contest you organized, I am writing to ask some details that did not mentioned on the notification
    First of all, please give me particular account of the regarding books such as publishing houses. Moreover, I also need to know the terms of payments for the fees. Last, I was wondering if the winner of the contest has any certification.
    I would like to express my gratitude for your time and consideration. I am looking forward hearing from you.
    Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am planning to take part in the contest you organized, I am writing to ask some details that did not mentioned on the notificationFirst of all, please give me particular account of the regarding books such as publishing houses. Moreover, I also need to know the terms of payments for the fees. Last, I was wondering if the winner of the contest has any certification.I would like to express my gratitude for your time and consideration. I am looking forward hearing from you. Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：5-6分整体错误比较少，但是字数不够，并且问询的第一二条套用模板的痕迹比较明显。