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    Dear Sir or Madam,
     I get the coverage that your company is holding a caring the elder project which needs volunteers from a newspaper. I would like to take part in the activity so I write to you to ask more details.
     First of all, I would like to know the address about the activity and the job the volunteers actually do. Secondly, would you please to tell me the concrete date of the activity and if it is constant or transient? Thirdly, how I could apply to it and where I could get an entry form?
     It is so nice for you to read my letter. And I look forward to hearing from you soon.
     Yours truly,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I get the coverage that your company is holding a caring the elder project which needs volunteers from a newspaper. I would like to take part in the activity so I write to you to ask more details. First of all, I would like to know the address about the activity and the job the volunteers actually do. Secondly, would you please to tell me the concrete date of the activity and if（去掉）it is（要用疑问的语气is it） constant or transient? Thirdly, how I could（这是个疑问句，要用could I） apply to it and where I could（这是个疑问句，要用could I） get an entry form? It is so nice for you to read my letter. And I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly, Li Ming点评：8分写的很不错。要注意句子是疑问还是陈述句。