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Dear Editor,
    I am a Shakespeare fan.I am writing this letter to request whether you have a version of the collected poemes of Shakespeare which published by your respected press in 1993.
    I must refer to few poemes,which were not collected by other versions,in order to accomplish my thesis favorably.Could you tell me the ways of delivery and the price of both book and delivery if you have such version of the book. If the book was sold out,maybe you can give me some useful information about where I can find this book.
    Thanks for your kindness to spend time on my letter.I would express my appreciation if you could reply this week for the sake of my anxiety due to the deadline for the thesis.
    Yours Sincerery,
Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Editor,I am a Shakespeare fan. I am writing this letter to request（这个词是要求的意思） whether you have a version of the collected poemes（拼写错误） of Shakespeare which published by your respected press in 1993.I must refer to few poemes（拼写错误）, which were not collected by other versions, in order to accomplish my thesis favorably. Could you tell me the ways of delivery and the price of both（加冠词） book and delivery if you have such version of the book.（这是个问句） If the book was sold out, maybe you can give me some useful information about where I can find this book.Thanks for your kindness to spend time on my letter. I would express my appreciation if you could reply this week for the sake of my anxiety due to the deadline for the thesis.Yours Sincerery（拼写错误）,
Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：5分字数超出的比较多。建议同学看一下问询信的范文。尤其是第二段，要分条提出问题，让你的作文很明晰。