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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
     I'm writing this letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you.
     To begin with, I take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for your selfless assistance you render me during my stay in Beijing. What's more, I borrowed one pair of yellow gloves from you when I went skiing with my friends in Beijing. Unfortunately, when I returned home, I found to my surprise that pair of gloves in my personal baggage due to my carelessness.
     To solve this problem, I would like to send this pair of gloves by Express Mail Service. Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused. I hope the settlement of this matter that will meet your wishes.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I'm writing this letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you. To begin with, I take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for your selfless assistance you render me during my stay in Beijing. What's more, I borrowed one pair of yellow gloves from you when I went skiing with my friends in Beijing. Unfortunately, when I returned home, I found to my surprise that pair of gloves in my personal baggage due to my carelessness. To solve this problem, I would like to send this pair of gloves by Express Mail Service.（建议写在第二段） Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused. I hope the settlement of this matter that（去掉）will meet your wishes. Yours sincerely,  Li Ming点评：6-7分要注意控制字数，如果字数已经超了的话，可以把第二段第一句话去掉。