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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Bob,
I am so sorry that your music CD is still in my bag and I forget to return it to you, so I should exert my heartfelt apology. Owning to I have just come back from Canada, and I couldn't return it to you immediately. However, there are some views can solve this problem. On the one hand, if you do not need it immediately I will send it by EMS for you. On the other hand, if you really want to use it immediately, I think I can subscribe the same music CD through the Internet shopping for you. Please accept my sincerely apologies for my carelessness, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly,Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I am so sorry that your music CD is still in my bag and I forget to return it to you, so I should exert my heartfelt apology. Owning to I have just come back from Canada, and I couldn't return it to you immediately. However, there are some views can solve this problem. On the one hand, if you do not need it immediately I will send it by EMS for you. On the other hand, if you really want to use it immediately, I think I can subscribe the same music CD through the Internet shopping for you. Please accept my sincerely apologies for my carelessness, and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly, Li Min点评：第一段写明这是一封道歉信即可，第二段再写因为什么道歉等内容。用的几乎都是模板的内容，可能会在考试时吃亏。