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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam:
     As a graduate student from Hebei University, I’m going to apply for admission into your esteemed company. Considered the high quality of your employees, I will be grateful if you can give me some further information about the standard of employed.
     First, I want to know whether it is necessary that I must apply for what I major in during my university. Second, I wonder what qualification you need since your company with a promising prospect. Third, whether your company require a native or not as your company’s major market is in Hebei.
     Thanks for your time.
    Yours sincerely,
    Liming.
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）:（英语中用逗号） As a graduate student from Hebei University, I’m going to apply for admission into your esteemed company. Considered the high quality of your employees, I will be grateful if you can give me some further information about the standard of employed（这里应该用名词employees）. First, I want to know whether it is necessary that（去掉，necessary与后面的must冲突） I must apply for what I major in during my university. Second, I wonder what qualification you need since your company with a promising prospect. Third, whether your company require a native（让人误以为指的是中国人） or not as your company’s major market is in Hebei. Thanks for your time.Yours sincerely,
Liming.（句号去掉）点评：6-7分整体还可以，就是错误有点多，要注意细节。