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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir/Madam,
     It is my honor to have your company`s information on the new product promotion schedule.It seems that you are searching an agency to make the effective and well effluence market project.I consider whether my company can take this case.
     In order to cope with this project well,there are some questions we hope to make it clear.First,when are you going to make the advertisement and how long will it last before the period and after the period.When defining the timing, it could be better arranged under control.Second, do your company require the immediate response or prefer the longer perspective?Finally , how much do you want to spend on the first stage and how much is the later expense?It would help the decision making if we understand your plan on cost and the scale of the project.
    Iam looking forward that we could make a desiderable co-operation based on each other`s trust and terrific team working.
     Your prompt reply would be considered.
    Yours sincerely
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir/Madam, It is my honor to have your company`s information on the new product promotion schedule. It seems that you are searching an agency to make the effective and well effluence market project. I consider whether my company can take this case. In order to cope with this project well,there are some questions we hope to make it clear. First, when are you going to make the advertisement and how long will it last before the period and after the period. When defining the timing, it could be better arranged under control. Second, do（应该用第三人称单数does） your company require the immediate response or prefer the longer perspective? Finally, how much do you want to spend on the first stage and how much is the later expense? It would help the decision making if we understand your plan on cost and the scale of the project.Iam looking forward that we could make a desiderable（拼写错误） co-operation based on each other`s trust and terrific team working（改成work，一般用team work）. Your prompt reply would be considered.Yours sincerely（加逗号） LiMing点评：5-6分超出字数太多，会被扣分。一般写三段就可以了。