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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
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Dear Bob,I’m writing to apologize for I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. After all these years leaving, we will finally have the chance to meet! But it is a pity that I will not pick you upon time. Because your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest I can get to the airport will be about an hour after your land. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge.Please accept my sincere apology. Looking forward to our meeting.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob,I’m writing to apologize for I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. After all these years leaving, we will finally have the chance to meet! But it is a pity that I will not pick you upon time. Because your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest(缺少一个名词) I can get to the airport will be about an hour after your land. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge.Please accept my sincere apology. Looking forward to our meeting.Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评:8分写的不错,错误比较少。同时建议看以下范文,看一下自己需要改进的地方。
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