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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Teacher:
     I am a senior student of our university who always spend my leisure time in this library. As a senior student, I want to improve myself as soon as I can.
     So, I want to have a ask if I can borrow more than four books from here to afford my further study. The second, our students usually study at school and we have few information from our society.So I think our library need more books and magazine which are new published.
     No matter if you can accept my suggestions, I want to express my thanks to you for reading this letter.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Teacher:（英语中用逗号） I am a senior student of our university who always spend my leisure time in this library. As a senior student, I want to improve myself as soon as I can. So, I want to have a（用an） ask if I can borrow more than four books from here to afford my further study. The second, our students usually study at school and we have few（用little，information是不可数名词） information from our society. So I think our library need more books and magazine which are new published. No matter if you can accept my suggestions, I want to express my thanks to you for reading this letter. Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：注意是问询信不是建议信。要旨在询问。