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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,As I am going to America to go to work , I want to know some of the regulation of that countryas to get the passport easily . Firstly , could you tell me how much should I pay for the passport .Secondly, please recommend me a book that could tell me the skill of how to get a passport .Thirdly ,I was very thankful if you could give me some details of the regulation about America. I will show my greatest appreciation for your time and consideration .I look forward to your reply and to hearing from you soon.   Yours sincerely,  Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am going to America to go to work , I want to know some of the regulation of that countryas to get the passport easily . Firstly , could you tell me how much should I pay for the passport .Secondly, please recommend me a book that could tell me the skill（最好用复数） of how to get a passport .Thirdly ,I was very thankful if you could give me some details of the regulation about America. I will show my greatest appreciation for your time and consideration .I look forward to your reply and to（去掉） hearing from you soon.   Yours sincerely,  Li Ming 点评：7-8分写的不错，条理很清晰。其实最后一句话的look forward to your reply和look forward to hearing from you soon是一个意思，用一个就可以了。