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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    As I am planning to study abroad for my further academic education.I have decided toapply for admission intoa famous foreign university with a due consideration of many aspects.
    Firstly,whatare the qualitificationsdo I need to follow a course of study in your esteemed school? I have already had a bachlor degree from Beijing University,but I wonder ifthere are any other requirements.Secondly,how much is the tuition fees?Although I intend to be self-supporting,I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships for international students.Thirdly,what is the situation of accommodation?
     I would like to be grateful for your essential information.I look forward to your reply and to hearing from you soon.
     Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am planning to study abroad for my further academic education.（这不是一句话，要把句号改成逗号） I have decided toapply for admission intoa famous foreign university with a due consideration of many aspects.Firstly, whatare the qualitifications（拼写错误）do I need to follow a course of study in your esteemed school? I have already had a bachlor（拼写错误） degree from Beijing University, but I wonder ifthere are any other requirements. Secondly, how much is the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships for international students. Thirdly, what is the situation of accommodation? I would like to be grateful for your essential information. I look forward to your reply and to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：7分应该是之前改过的作文。注意拼写。字数有点超。