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发表于 2017-8-6 14:08:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改,新东方在线考研频道编辑整理,总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文:

Dear Sir or Madam:
     I am a senior from the school of Chemistry, Chongqing Normal (Normal) professional. Recently, I am reading the advertise position of your educational institution in the Chongqing Morning News. My intention to write the letter is applying for the position of a Chemistry teacher .
     I believe that I qualified for this job. There are three reasons as follow .The major reason is that I am a normal students and fully mastered the skills of normal students. Secondly, I have two years of experience of tutor. During the two years I got fully exercise. Finally, I have a strong professional spirit, cheerful personality.
     I would like to express my gratitude for your kind reading my letter. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
        Yours sincerely,
       Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下:
   
Dear Sir or Madam:(英语中用逗号) I am a senior from the school of Chemistry, Chongqing Normal (Normal) professional. Recently, I am reading the advertise position of your educational institution in the Chongqing Morning News. My intention to write the letter is applying for the position of a Chemistry teacher . I believe that I qualified for this job. There are three reasons as follow .The major reason is that I am a normal students(用单数) and fully mastered the(去掉) skills of normal students. Secondly, I have two years of experience of tutor. During the two years I got fully exercise. Finally, I have a strong professional spirit, cheerful personality. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind reading(加介词of) my letter. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.    Yours sincerely,   Li Ming点评:6-7分第一段要在简洁一点。字数超了。如果不清楚怎样写可以找范文看一下。
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