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To whom it may concern,
    I am a studentin Digial ArtAcademy who wishes to admisson into your English corner .My plan is to start my living life in English corner next week.I would be grateful if you would be kind euough to give some certain essiential informations.
     Firstly,what is the qualifications do I need to follow a memeber of your English club.I have passed CET-6.I wonder if there is further requirement should I know.Secondly,How much of the activity fees every year for every students in it?I see English corner goes for a trip every term and plays flims in classroom 101 on sunday evening.Lastly,How many forein teachers will part in our speaking practice ?
     Thanks for your time. I look forward to your reply and attending your esteemed club.
    Yours sincerely,
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
To whom it may concern,I am a studentin Digial（拼写错误） ArtAcademy who wishes to admisson（拼写错误） into your English corner .My plan is to start my living life in English corner next week. I would be grateful if you would be kind euough（拼写错误） to give some certain essiential（拼写错误）informations（information是不可数名词）. Firstly, what is the qualifications do I need to follow a memeber（拼写错误） of your English club. I have passed CET-6.I wonder if there is further requirement should I know. Secondly, How（h小写） much of the activity fees every year for every students in it? I see English corner goes for a trip every term and plays flims（拼写错误） in classroom 101 on sunday evening. Lastly, How（h小写） many forein（拼写错误） teachers will （加take）part in our speaking practice ? Thanks for your time. I look forward to your reply and attending your esteemed club.Yours sincerely,LiMing点评：6分字数有点多，拼写错误太多。