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Dear Sir or Madam, As I am contemplating avisitto Tianjin museum with my classmates this weekend, I have decided to place an order of some tickets with due consideration of the good reputation of your travel agency and the high efficiency booking system.  First of all, I would be much grateful if you could help me make reservations for ten tickets of this Sunday. I need to know the museum opening times as well. Secondly, we are all undergraduates of Tianjin university, so I would like to inquire if there are any discounts available on entrance tickets for students.  Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
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Dear Sir or Madam, As I am contemplating avisitto Tianjin museum with my classmates this weekend, I have decided to place an order of some tickets with due consideration of the good reputation of your travel agency and the high efficiency booking system.  First of all, I would be much grateful if you could help me make reservations for ten tickets of this Sunday. I need to know the museum opening times（time当时间讲时是不可数名词） as well. Secondly, we are all undergraduates of Tianjin university（具体的某所大写，首字母大写）, so I would like to inquire if there are any discounts available on entrance tickets for students.  Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7-8分写的很不错。第二段第一句话，建议改成：请问博物馆有没有XX的票。因为是问询信，不是预定信。