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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing the letter is purpose of the Chinese lecture. I am a freshman student from the Department of English in this university that is like Chinese.
Would you please rule tells us of the contest? For instance, to begin with, what the time is matching for the Chinese lecture. Moreover, the content of Chinese speaking prepare for us. Lastly, the position of match which is the Chinese deparement.
Thank you for your time to read the letter for us. Looking forward to your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
LI Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing the letter is（改成in，am writing是这句话的谓语动词部分） purpose of the Chinese lecture. I am a freshman student（去掉，freshman就是新生的意思）from the Department of English in this university that is like Chinese（想要表达什么意思？like做喜欢将时，是动词，that引导限定性定语从句，限定词是前边的university）.Would you please rule（这个词在这里要表达什么意思？） tells us of the contest? For instance, to begin with, what the time is matching for the Chinese lecture. Moreover, the content of Chinese speaking prepare for us.（这句话没有问询的意思）Lastly, the position of match which is the Chinese deparement（拼写错误）.（这不是一句完整的话）Thank you for your time to read the letter for us. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, LI Ming点评：4-5分错误有点多，建议照片范文分析一下该怎样写。