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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a student whoispreparing the enterance examination of postguarduate. In a due consideration of your shop's great quality and reputation, Idecideto buy some referrence books from your shop.
     Firstly, would you offer me some details such asnames,published,authors and the price about the books? Secondly, I need to know the means to pay for them. It is very kind of you, if you could delivery the books to me.
     I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated,
    Your sencerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student whoispreparing the enterance（拼写错误） examination of postguarduate（拼写错误）. In a due consideration of your shop's great quality and reputation, Idecideto buy some referrence（拼写错误） books from your shop. Firstly, would you offer me some details such asnames,published,authors and the price about the books? Secondly, I need to know the means to pay for them. It is very kind of you, if you could delivery（应该用动词deliver） the books to me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated,Your sencerely（拼写错误）,Li Ming点评：用的模板内容太多了。