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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to enquire about the English reference book for prepare the CET4 text.First of all, I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a book, which have vocabulary exercise and largely listening comprehension exercise. Moreover, If I Buy the Book, I would like to be informed about whether I can pay you for the book via network. Last, I am also interested in weather you can deliver the book to me by way of EMS since I am in urgent need of the book.I am thanks again for your help, looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerelyLi Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to enquire about the English reference book for prepare（介词后用动名词） the CET4 text.First of all, I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a book, which have vocabulary exercise and largely listening comprehension exercise. Moreover, If I Buy（b小写） the Book（b小写）, I would like to be informed about whether I can pay you for the book via network. Last, I am also interested in weather（这里应该用whether） you can deliver the book to me by way of EMS since I am in urgent need of the book.I am（去掉） thanks again for your help,（加连词and） looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：几乎是按照模板的内容写的，你需要加入自己的内容。