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Dear Miss Zhao
   
    My name is Li Ming. I am writing this letter in order to ask for some advice about improving English speaking and listening in a short time.
   
    I am going to do the intership in a China-America company next month and I was told there would be many foreign collegues. To learn more from them, I have to ask more questions and understand them well. Since I don’t have enough time to take classes, is there any way to practice speaking and listening skills at home?
   
    Thanks for your time and I am looking forwarding to hearing from you.
   
    Sincerely yours
    Li Ming
   
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Miss Zhao（加逗号）My name is Li Ming. I am writing this letter in order to ask for（去掉，ask for是要求的意思，这里用ask表询问就可以了） some advice about improving English speaking and listening in a short time. I am going to do the intership（拼写错误） in a China-America company（貌似没有这个表达的） next month and I was told there would be many foreign collegues（拼写错误）. To learn more from them, I have to ask more questions and understand them well. Since I don’t have enough time to take classes, is there any way to practice speaking and listening skills at home? Thanks for your time and I am looking forwarding to hearing from you. Sincerely yours（加逗号）Li Ming 点评：7分写的很不错。要注意格式和拼写，不要在格式上丢分。