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Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize for I am unable to attend your birthday party this Sunday. Yesterday I received a notice that there is going to be a math class this Sunday, and then I will have an exam. The exam does important to me so I couldn’t miss it.I am indeed very sorry for I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and it is a pity that I lost the opportunity to share time with you and other friends. But I’d like to wish you a happy birthday here and send a gift to you by EMS. I hope you will like it.Please allow me to say sorry again. I look forward to your reply.Yours truly,
   
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to apologize for I am unable to attend your birthday party this Sunday. Yesterday I received a notice that there is going to be a math class this Sunday, and then I will have an exam. The exam does important to me so I couldn’t miss it.I am indeed very sorry for I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and it is a pity that I lost the opportunity to share time with you and other friends. But I’d like to wish you a happy birthday here and（加主语I） send a gift to you by EMS. I hope you will like it.Please allow me to say sorry again. I look forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：5-6分第一段的内容其实是和第二段重复的，都是在道歉，第一段写明来意，表明这封信是道歉信即可，第二段再说明是为什么道歉等内容。注意控制你的字数。