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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam，
I am a traveler from the Gansu province and my famliy are plan to travel to Hongkong at May holiday. As we consider the good reputation of your travel agence and high quality of your services，we would like to take your group of traveling of Hongkong.
     To begin with，I would like to konw the price ，time and service of this travel？In addition，I also to know how could we go to Hongkong？last but not least，could you give me a detail plan for this travel？ I would like to gratitude for your answer my question at your ealist conveience. I look forward to hearing from your reply as soon as possible.  Yourssincerely，  Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam， I am a traveler from the Gansu province and my famliy（拼写错误） are plan to travel to Hongkong（Hong Kong） at May holiday. As we consider the good reputation of your travel agence（拼写错误） and high quality of your services，we would like to take your group of traveling of Hongkong（Hong Kong）.  To begin with，I would like to konw（拼写错误） the price ，time and service of this travel？In addition，I also（加want） to know how could we go to Hongkong（Hong Kong）？last（Last） but not least，could you give me a detail（应该用detailed）plan for this travel？（另起一段）I would like to gratitude for your answer my question at your ealist conveience（拼写错误）. I look forward to hearing from your reply as soon as possible. Yours（空格）sincerely，  Li Ming （落款位于右下角）点评：5-6分字数有点超，错误有点多。