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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am Li Ming ,a undergrate student from Zhong San medical university, It is very glad to read your advertise on newspaper for a secretry,I want to apply for this job,but I have many questions about it.such as:
     First:if you define age?I am 18.
     second:if you limit speciality?I was majored in medicine
     Third:I had no experence on secratry,but I am specialize in writting ,if you will give me more changce to be trained for other skills
     Four:If am successed in applying this job,I want to know my salary and other treatment
     With enclosed resume of mine Look foward your writting back and happy everyday!
     yours Sincerely
     Li ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Ming , a（用an）undergrate（拼写错误） student from Zhong San medical university（用学校正确的名字，首字母大写）, It is very glad to read your advertise（用名词advertisement） on newspaper for a secretry（拼写错误）, I want to apply for this job, but I have many（改成some） questions about it. such as:（去掉） First: if（改成do） you define age? I am 18. second: if（改成do） you limit speciality（拼写错误）? I was majored in medicine Third: I had no experence（拼写错误） on secratry（拼写错误）, but I am specialize in writting（拼写错误） ,if you will give me more changce（拼写错误） to be trained for other skills Four:If am successed（拼写错误） in applying this job, I want to know my salary and other treatment With enclosed resume of mine Look foward（拼写错误） your writting（拼写错误） back and happy everyday! yours Sincerely（Yours sincerely，） Li ming（Ming）点评：不符合询问信的格式。请同学找范文看一下。拼写错误太多。