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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a sincere reader of your forum.And the activity about composition which you are holding attracts me to take part in.However,I have some questions for your help.And I would be much grateful if you are so kind as to give me the solution.
     To begin with,what is the detail about this topic?I just be asked for writing a letter of inquiry,but I don’t know what mattershouldIwrite.Moreover,if I finish the composition arbitrarily,is there anyoneto help me correct it?Lastly,couldI use thedictionary to help me write?
     I really wish to join in this activity.Thank you for yourhelp and looking forward to your reply.
     Yours truly,
        Li Ming
   
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a sincere reader of your forum. And the activity about composition which you are holding attracts me to take part in. However, I have some question（用复数） for your help. And I would be much grateful if you are so kind as to give me the solution. To begin with, what is the detail about this topic? I just be asked for writing a letter of inquiry, but I don’t know what mattershouldIwrite. Moveover（拼写错误）, if I finish the composition arbitrarily, is there anyoneto help me correct it? Lastly, couldI use thedictionary to help me write? I realy（拼写错误） wish to join in this activity. Thank you for yourhelp and looking forward to your reply.   Yours truly,    Li Ming点评：6-7分字数有点多，写的还可以，这个选题感觉不是很好。