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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Mr. Smith, I am a college student, in grade four. As I am planning to take the examination of cet-6, I have decided to place an order of some cet-6 books with dueconsideration the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books. I have some hope for these books. Firstly, please give me some particular accounts, such as the regard names, publishing houses, authors .Secondly, please help me to seek out some newer books and the real test paper from 2000 to 2011.Thirdly,if you have got ready for these books, please give a call to xxxxxxx. I would like to express my gratitude for your patience of reading this letter so careful. I would like to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Mr. Smith, I am a college student, in grade four. As I am planning to take the examination of cet-6, I have decided to place an order of some cet-6 books with dueconsideration（应该加of）the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books. I have some hope for these books. Firstly, please give me some particular accounts, such as the regard names, publishing houses, authors. Secondly, please help me to seek out some newer books and the real test paper from 2000 to 2011.Thirdly, if you have got ready for these books,（加连词） please give a call to xxxxxxx. I would like to express my gratitude for your patience of reading this letter so careful. I would like to hearing from you soon.（避免累述）  Yours sincerely,Li Ming点评：6-7分写的还可以，尽量避免让人看出你用的模板的痕迹。