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Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am very interested in the party which will be hold in your park next week,so I writeto request some detail infomation about it. I am much grateful if you could answer my questions.
     Firstly, what is the main style of the party, modern or classical? It is important for me to choose my clothes.Secondly, what peformance will be show during the party? Since I like singsing very much, could I sing a song?Finally, should I buy a ticket before attend the party, if need, then how much?
     I am looking forward to hearing from you.
     Yours Sincerely
      Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,  I am very interested in the party which will be hold in your park next week,so I writeto request some detailinfomation（detailed information） about it. I am much grateful if you could answer my questions.  Firstly, what is the main style of the party, modern or classical? It is important for me to choose my clothes.Secondly, what peformance（拼写错误） will be show（被动语态，用过去分词） during the party? Since I like singsing（拼写错误）very much, could I sing a song? Finally, should I buy a ticket before attend（介词后用动名词）the party, if need, then how much?  I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely（加逗号）  Li Ming点评：7-8分写的很不错的，但是拼写错误有点多了，在拼写上丢分就比较遗憾了。