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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam，
    My name is Li Ming. I am writing this letter in order to ask for some advice about improving my English reading and writing in a short time.
    I am going to take Graduate Record Examination and I find a lot of questions in my writing and reading. First I don’t know how to express my mind and no word to write. Second I cannot read an essay clearly and sometimes I don’t know what it says. Third I don’t have much confidence on this exam.
    Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your reply.
     Yours truthly,
     Li Ming
   
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam，My name is Li（不用空格） Ming. I am writing this letter in order to ask for some advice about improving my English reading and writing in a short time.I am going to take Graduate Record Examination and I find a lot of questions in my writing and reading. First I don’t know how to express my mind and no word to write. Second I cannot read an essay clearly and sometimes I don’t know what it says. Third I don’t have much confidence on this exam.Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours truthly（拼写错误）, Li Ming点评：8分写的很不错，格式也比较新颖。