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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear sir or madam:
     As I am planning to further my education, I intend to quit my present job teaching to apply for your college ,and major in Pedagogy.I would be grateful if you let me know the details of enrolling as follow:
     Firstly, would you tell me any about your requirments for qualification of candidates? Will a previous graduate who have 3-year teaching experience be preferred?
     Secondly, I need to know what kind of test I should prepare for or I have to take in advance?
     Lastly, I also wonder if there is any possible for me to apply for the scholarship? It would be very nice if you send me the interlinkage of website include the relavant information of enrolling and scholarship.
     I am looking forward to hearing from you in your earliest convenience.
     Yours truly
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）:（英语中用逗号） As I am planning to further my education, I intend to quit my present job teaching to apply for your college , and （加主语I）major in Pedagogy. I would be grateful if you let me know the details of enrolling as follow: Firstly, would you tell me any about your requirments（拼写错误） for qualification of candidates? Will a previous graduate who have 3-year teaching experience be preferred?  Secondly, I need to know what kind of test I should prepare for or I have to take in advance?  Lastly, I also wonder if there is any possible for me to apply for the scholarship?（这是个陈述句，用句号） It would be very nice if you send me the interlinkage（拼写错误） of website include the relavant（拼写错误）information of enrolling and scholarship.  I am looking forward to hearing from you in（用介词at） your earliest convenience.  Yours truly（加逗号） Li Ming点评：5分字数超出的比较多。一般分三段，问询的内容位于第二段，不要一句话一段的写。建议看一下范文。