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Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the following aspects.
    First of all, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Secondly, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours?
    I would also like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
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Dear Sir or Madam,I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the following aspects.First of all, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Secondly, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours?I would also like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板内容太多了。要适当的加入自己的东西。