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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a senior who will enroll in the graduate entrance examination this year and wants to pursue my degree in your department. And I am writing this letter for inquring some relevant information.
     Firstly, I would like to know how many students are you planning to admit this year. Secondly, I wonder the number of applicants and the score of admission line recent years. I would express my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to privide me the list of reference books.
     Thank you for your time and explanation. I am looking forward your reply.
    Yours sincerely,
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a senior who will enroll in the graduate entrance examination this year and wants（主语是I，改成want） to pursue my degree in your department. And I am writing this letter for inquring（拼写错误） some relevant information. Firstly, I would like to know how many students are you（这是个陈述句，用you are） planning to admit this year. Secondly, I wonder the number of applicants and the score of admission line recent years. I would express my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to privide（拼写错误） me the list of reference books.  Thank you for your time and explanation. I am looking forward your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：8分写的不错，常用词别拼错，尽量少用模板内容。