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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam
     My name is Liming.I am agraduat student in this university.I want to buy some books about MAMS.
    Firstly,please give me a counts about authors,puplishing houses.I want to kown more about the
    books.Secondly,i want to kown how to pay for it.Last,can you sent it to me by EMS?
     Thank you for you time and consdertion.I will wait for your early reply.
     Yours Sincerely
     Liming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam（加逗号） My name is Liming. I am agraduat（拼写错误） student in this university. I want to buy some books about MAMS.Firstly, please give me a counts（单复数一致） about authors, （加连词）puplishing（拼写错误） houses. I want to kown（拼写错误） more about thebooks. Secondly, i（大写） want to kown（拼写错误） how to pay for it. Last, can you sent（用原型，前面是can） it to me by EMS? Thank you for you（your） time and consdertion（拼写错误）. I will wait for your early reply. Yours Sincerely（加逗号） Liming点评：5分错误比较多，模板内容太多。同时要注意格式。