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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir/Madam,
     I am a senior student from XX University,as I intend to continue my further study at a foreign university after this final semester ended.I am writing to ask for particular accountsinto it.
First of all,I wonder to know how about the accommodation of the university isand if I choose the single-room how can I apply for it? Secondly,it is about the terms of the payment of fees,in cash or by credit-card?Thirdly, I am not very clearly in terms of the qualification identity,could you tell me it in detail?
I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir/Madam,  I am a senior student from XX University, as I intend to continue my further study at a foreign university after this final semester ended（去掉）. I am writing to ask for particular accountsinto it.
First of all, I wonder to know how about the accommodation of the university isand if I choose the single-room how can I apply for it? Secondly, it is about the terms of the payment of fees, in cash or by credit-card? Thirdly, I am not very clearly in terms of the qualification identity, could you tell me it in detail?
I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分结构上没有什么问题，你的表达能力需要提高。