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Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am writing to ask for information about your agency's Tangshan hot springs travel packages for the spring festival.My family and I plan to travel there.Therefore,I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
     First of all,what is the size of the Tangshan hot springs,is there any other scenic spots or historical site in the surrounding?Secondly,could you provide accommodation for ten people,and what are the daily opening hours?
     Any information you can provide would be greatly appreciated.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliestconvenience.
    Yours cordially,
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask for information about your agency's Tangshan hot springs travel packages for the spring festival. My family and I plan to travel there. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. First of all, what is the size of the Tangshan hot springs, （加连词）is there any other scenic spots or historical site in the surrounding? Secondly, could you provide accommodation for ten people, and what are the daily opening hours?  Any information you can provide would be greatly appreciated. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliestconvenience.Yours cordially, LiMing点评：8-9分写的很好，条理很清楚，也没有什么错误。