考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(141)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    As I am planing to take the National EntranceTest of English for MA Candidates(NETEM),I am writing the letter in purpose of placing an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
    Firstly, .I wonder if you have the following books:a vocabulary book covering the 5500 words for the test,NETEM Reading and NETEM Writing.Secondly,I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service.Thirdly,I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to my house.
    I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
      Yours sinerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am planing（双写n加ing） to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA Candidates (NETEM), I am writing the letter in purpose of placing an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.Firstly, .I wonder if you have the following books: a vocabulary book covering the 5500 words for the test, NETEM Reading and NETEM Writing. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to my house.I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sinerely（拼写错误）,
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