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To whom it may concern,As I am a faithful reader of your magazine and always appreciate your particular column of Ask Sinfery, which mainly introduce the latest movies to the public, and I am writing this letter in the hope of your assistance to answer some questions for me.To begin with, I want to know the exact time when the column can be seen from your magazine, for I find that it not use to be appeared regularly. Secondly, do you have any other ways of communication with readers, for example, internet? Last but not least, would you have some activities organized between readers and editors so that they could communicate with each other face to face?Thank you for your time, and your prompt attention to my questions would be highly regarded. Yours sincerely,Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
To whom it may concern,As I am a faithful reader of your magazine and always appreciate your particular column of Ask Sinfery, which mainly introduce the latest movies to the public, and I am writing this letter in the hope of your assistance to answer some questions for me.To begin with, I want to know the exact time when the column can be seen from your magazine, for I find that it not use to be appeared regularly. Secondly, do you have any other ways of communication with readers, for example, internet（Internet）? Last but not least, would you have some activities organized between readers and editors so that they could communicate with each other face to face?Thank you for your time, and your prompt attention to my questions would be highly regarded. Yours sincerely,Li Ming（两行内容位于右下角）点评：7-8分写的很好，语言表达的很自如，但是字数比较多。