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    考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a tourist from a Beijing tourism agency. With due consideration of the good reputation of your hotel, I have decided to book several rooms in January in your hotel.
    Firstly, please give me the exact number of the room with one bedroom that I can book at that time. Secondly, I also need to know if it is possible for you to give me a brief description about the traffic situation around your hotel. Thirdly, I wonder if it's convenient for you to tell me if there will be any discounts in January since it's the off-peak season.
    I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earlist convenience.
                                                                     Yours sincerely,
                                                                       Li Ming
     
        考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am a tourist from a Beijing tourism agency. With due consideration of the good reputation of your hotel, I have decided to book several rooms in January in your hotel.
    Firstly, please give me the exact number of the room with one bedroom（这里要表达的是什么意思？） that I can book at that time. Secondly, I also need to know if it is possible for you to give me a brief description about the traffic situation around your hotel. Thirdly, I wonder if it's convenient for you to tell me if there will be any discounts in January since it's the off-peak season.
    I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earlist（拼写错误） convenience.
                                                                 Yours sincerely,
                                                                       Li Ming（落款位于右下角） 点评：8-9分写的很不错，能比较好的利用模板。字迹尽量好辨认，老师判作文的速度比较快，如果一些词看不出什么词的话肯定会有影响的。