考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(174)

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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
     I am a senior and planning to take the Entrance Test for greduate student of English. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the Sprint Courses of English.
     First of all, please give me particular accounts about teachers'names, and the plan of courses. Secondly, how many ways would you tell me to take the classes.Thirdly, when will the terms begin and how about after-sell service.
     I would also like to inquire the reputation of you school and the quality of your lessons. Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-metioned aspects?
     Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
     Yours sincerely,
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a senior and planning to take the Entrance Test for greduate（拼写错误）student of English. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the Sprint Courses of English. First of all, please give me particular accounts about teachers' names, and the plan of courses. Secondly, how many ways would you tell me to take the classes.（用问号） Thirdly, when will the terms begin and how about after-sell service. I would also like to inquire the reputation of you（your） school and the quality of your lessons. Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-metioned （拼写错误）aspects? Thank you for you（your） kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分字数有点多，写的还不错，看得出是背过模板了。