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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear madam or sir;
     I am a university graduate student in China.My parents plan to let me study abroad to learn something that those stay at home can't study.But we don't know what we should watch once go abroard.So I need your help.
    Firstly,I have no idea which school is suit for me and do good to my long-term sudying.There are various kinds of universities which are known to us all over the world.Secondly,the fee of sudying abroad especiallyinAmericanis the problem which I take into consideration.Thirdly,I want to know whether it is necessary for me to study some social culture on those countries.
     Thank you for your review,I am looking frward your require.
     Your sincerely
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear madam or sir（madam和sir的首字母大写）;（英语里用逗号） I am a（用an） university graduate student in China. My parents plan to let me study abroad to learn something that those stay at home can't study. But we don't know what we should watch once go abroard（拼写错误）. So I need your help.Firstly, I have no idea which school is suit for me and do good to my long-term sudying（拼写错误）. There are various kinds of universities which are known to us all over the world. Secondly, the fee of sudying（拼写错误） abroad especiallyinAmericanis the problem which I take into consideration. Thirdly, I want to know whether it is necessary for me to study some social culture on those countries. Thank you for your review, I am looking frward（拼写错误） your require（这个词是询问的意思，这里应该用一个表示回答的词。）. Your（Yours） sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：6分注意拼写啊，这些词都是常见词。另外多看看范文，学习一下表达。