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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student who descide to taking the National Entrace for Master of Arts Candidates by next year.It is well-know that in English area who is represent the authority in Chain now.Therefor,I have some of questions asked for you in the following.
In the one hand,as a art student for Ebglish side respond to very weak,and I want to know that what the best and effectively way to improve my reading ability.For an others,how could me enhance my capability for writing, which can takes me hold more score.
I really want to pass this test,and look forward hearing from you soon,and then heartfelt wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student who descide（拼写错误） to taking（用动词原形，前面是不定式to） the National Entrace（拼写错误）for Master of Arts Candidates by next year. It is well-know that in English area who is represent（不能同时用两个动词） the authority in Chain now. Therefor（拼写错误）, I have some of（去掉）questions asked for you in the following. In the one hand, as a（用an） art student for Ebglish（拼写错误） side respond to very weak, and I want to know that what（加谓语动词is） the best and effectively way to improve my reading ability. For an others（another）, how could me enhance my capability for writing, which can takes me hold more score. I really want to pass this test, and look forward hearing from you soon, and then heartfelt wishes for you. 署名 Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：5-6分错误有点多，另外写的不够简洁。建议看一下范文。