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To Whom It May Concern,
     I'm a freshman from the Department of Art and Calligraphy of Shanxi Normal University . I'm writing to the letter for the purpose of enquiring about the mianly situation of library.
     Firstly,I wonder whether the library will open in the weekend?Because I will intend regularly come to the library to spend my spare time.Secondly,how long can I borrow the books from the library?Thirdly,how many books can I borrow at best from the library?
     Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
     Yours sincerely,(右下角)
     Li Ming（右下角）
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
To Whom It May Concern, I'm a freshman from the Department of Art and Calligraphy of Shanxi Normal University. I'm writing to the letter for the purpose of enquiring about the mianly（拼写错误） situation of library. Firstly, I wonder whether the library will open in the weekend?（这是个陈述句） Because I will intend regularly come to the library to spend my spare time. Secondly, how long can I borrow the books from the library? Thirdly, how many books can I borrow at best from the library? Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely,(右下角) Li Ming（右下角）点评：6-7分写的不错，字数有点不够。开头的标题不建议用To Whom It May Concern，因为很明显是写给library工作人员的。