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Dear Sir orMadam,
    I haveread the annual scheme issued from your school and found that you have an graduate program of network engineering , which has caught my eyes immediately.I would be extend my appreciation if you would kind enough to provide me with some essential information.
     Firstly, what qualification Iwant to be ifI want to study at your university ?Secondly, how much are the tuition fees? andI would like to konw if there any scholships for astudent who has prominent achievement at his study? Besides, would you please send me some further details about the program?
     Thank you fou consideration andI am look forward to you reply.
    Yours Sincerely,
     LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir orMadam,I haveread the annual scheme issued from your school and found that you have an graduate program of network engineering , which has caught my eyes immediately. I would be extend my appreciation if you would kind enough to provide me with some essential information. Firstly, what qualification Iwant（应该用need） to be ifI want to study at your university ?Secondly, how much are the tuition fees? andI would like to know（拼写错误） if there any scholships（拼写错误） for astudent who has prominent achievement at his study? Besides, would you please send me some further details about the program? Thank you fou（for） consideration andI am look（looking，前边用的am） forward to you（要用your）reply.Yours Sincerely, LiMing点评：7分注意细节，常用语句上不要出错。