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考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Sir or Madam:
     It is great honor for me to have the chance to learn that your company is employing engineers this week.Since the employment info is not enough to be fully acknowledged,then I am writing to require more infomation about the position and your company.
     First of all,please allow me to introduce myself briefly.I am a graduated student and major in Computer Science.During the college studying,I have developed some sofewares such as Students Management and File Management in the same development language as what is required in your employment. Secondly,I have taked part in many outside-school activities,for example,market promoting for mobiles and teaching two children as their family teacher on maths and computer,the two practices also get good rewards from the employers. Thirdly,I am indeligent and pleasure to work with.What's more,the sustained capability of studying is my stenghens.
     So,I want to know whether the professional work suits for me.Please feel free to write me as ****@126.com or call me at 12345678.
    I am right here waiting for your reback.
    Yours sincerely,
    LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号） It is great honor for me to have the chance to learn that your company is employing engineers this week. Since the employment info is not enough to be fully acknowledged, then I am writing to require（inquiry，require是要求命令的意思） more infomation（拼写错误） about the position and your company. First of all, please allow me to introduce myself briefly. I am a graduated（graduate） student and major in Computer Science. During the college studying, I have developed some sofewares（拼写错误） such as Students Management and File Management in the same development language as what is required in your employment. Secondly, I have taked（taken） part in many outside-school activities, for example, market promoting for mobiles and teaching two children as their family teacher on maths（拼写错误） and computer, the two practices also get good rewards from the employers. Thirdly, I am indeligent（拼写错误） and pleasure to work with. What's more, the sustained capability of studying is my stenghens（拼写错误）. So, I want to know whether the professional work suits for me. Please feel free to write me as ****@126.com or （加不定式to）call me at 12345678.I am right here waiting for your reback（拼写错误）.Yours sincerely,LiMing（落款位于右下角）点评：不符合询问信的格式，请同学找范文看一下。第二段的内容没有必要介绍，可以去掉。重点在你有哪些问题需要进行询问。