考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(188)

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考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。
考研英语待批改作文：

Dear Gentlemen or Ladies:I am a college student who studying in Tianjin Normal University,and I have seen your graduate college could be applied by the foreign students and I will be much grateful to study in the school.But I have several request for the prepare of application. First,could you sent me a modle of application.Second,it will be grateful if you can tell me the TOELF and GER stand line.I will be much appreciate if you could meet my demand.Thank you for your time.  Yours sincerely, Li Ming.
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疑问:1:第一句中的studying应该用ing形式吗？好像是在从句中作主语吧~2：第二段第一句for the prepare是否应为for the preparation。从总体上看总觉得这句话后半部分不对劲。
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Gentlemen or Ladies（用单数，一般打开看你信的是一个人）:（英语中用逗号）I am a college student who studying(做从句的谓语，不用非谓语动词形式) in Tianjin Normal University, and I have seen your graduate college could be applied by the foreign students and I will be much grateful to study in the school.But I have several request for the prepare（这里应该用名词） of application. First, could you sent（用原型，前面是could） me a modle（拼写错误） of application. Second, it will be grateful if you can tell me the TOELF and GER stand line.I will be much appreciate（前边有be，这里不能用动词原形） if you could meet my demand. Thank you for your time.  Yours sincerely, Li Ming.（不用句号） 点评：5-6分第二部分过于简短，字数不够。注意格式