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Dear Bob,
     Long time no see, are you having a good time in Qingdao? I'm your old friend ,Li Ming. Last week, I am admitted to Haier Bloc to be a member of the staff. But I have never been to Qingdao. I am writing the letter for purpose of requesting several problems about working in Qingdao.
     First and foremost,I want to know which kind of transportation is the best I would choose,bus or driving? In addition,what's the specialty of weather about Qingdao? last but no least, do you know whether it has a a quiet place for habitation near the company ?
     My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours sincerely，
    Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Bob,  Long time no see, are you having a good time in Qingdao? I'm your old friend , Li Ming. Last week, I am admitted to Haier Bloc to be a member of the staff. But I have never been to Qingdao. I am writing the letter for（in purpose of） purpose of requesting several problems about working in Qingdao. First and foremost, I want to know which kind of transportation is the best I would choose, bus or driving? In addition, what's the specialty of weather about Qingdao? last（Last）but no（not）least, do you know whether it has a a（去掉一个） quiet place for habitation near the company ? My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely，Li Ming点评：6-7分第一段的内容需要简化，去掉一些不必要的内容。整体在100词浮动。