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Dear Sir or Madam,
    As I am organizing a group of students to take part in a social survey project, I have decided to bring them to the historical exhibiton in your museum with the considerration of the good reputation of your exhibiton center and the high quality of your service.I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the details below.
    Firstly, would you please give me particular accounts as regards scale, theme, and the what objects are on display? Secondly, I also need to know the dates the exhibition to be held and the daily open hours. And lastly, I must point out that I hope to bring many students to the display, so I would like to inquire if there is any discount available for the tickets?
    Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.I am looking forwad to hearing from you soon.
     Yours sincerely
     Li Ming
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
   
Dear Sir or Madam,As I am organizing a group of students to take part in a social survey project, I have decided to bring them to the historical exhibiton（拼写错误）in your museum with the considerration（拼写错误） of the good reputation of your exhibiton（拼写错误） center and the high quality of your service. I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the details below.Firstly, would you please give me particular accounts as regards scale, theme, and the what objects are on display?（前面是陈述语气，这里与前面保持一致，改成the subjects on display）Secondly, I also need to know the dates the exhibition to be held and the daily open hours. And lastly, I must point out that I hope to bring many students to the display, so I would like to inquire if there is any discount available for the tickets? （这是个陈述句）Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. I am looking forwad（拼写错误） to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：6分字数太多，用的模板内容太多。注意单词拼写。