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DearSirorMadam,Iamaseniorstudentwhoisgoingtotaketheentranceexaminationforthepost-graduatestudent.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomedetailedinformationaboutthefollowingbook.Firstly,IwanttoknowwhetheryouhavethebookwiththenameofGoneWiththeWindinstoresothatitcanbeavailableformeimmediately.
Secondly,withtheconsiderationofthehighqualityofyourbooks,notonlymebutalsoallofmyclassmateswanttobuyone.SoIwonderifyou
aresokindastooffermesomediscount.Lastly,Iamnotreallyquiteclearofthewayofpayment.Ireallyhopethatmyquestionswillnotbringyoutoomuchtrouble.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing
   
     考研英语作文批改点评如下：
DearSirorMadam,Iamaseniorstudentwhoisgoingtotaketheentranceexaminationforthepost-graduatestudent.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomedetailedinformationaboutthefollowingbook.Firstly,Iwanttoknowwhetheryouhavethebookwiththenameof（这几个词可以去掉）GoneWiththeWindinstoresothatitcanbeavailableformeimmediately.Secondly,withtheconsiderationofthehighqualityofyourbooks,
notonlymebutalsoallofmyclassmateswanttobuyone.SoIwonderifyouaresokindastooffermesomediscount.Lastly,Iamnotreallyquiteclearofthewayofpayment.Ireallyhopethatmyquestionswillnotbringyoutoomuchtrouble.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiMing（落款位于右下角）点评：6分字数有点多，要简化你的表达。为了更快的修改每位同学的作文，每个题目没人限改一篇作文，请谅解。